This is my Retouch of the of project three the Brochure. I went with a smaller brochure this time because, i didn't have enough information. I kept it same look but i push the it a little further. I also added new images that fit the content well. Finally last time some of you guys told that bold italic for the headlines were ugly so i just made them bold which i think it works very well.
Jose - you have done it. This holds together beautifully, and the content/image connection is very strong. Just a few things:
ReplyDelete1. It appears like your red Bheads are bigger than they need to be.
2. The gutter margin on a number of pages looks too small... the type approaches the gutter in the middle of the spread too closely. Please review this and adjust your master page margins and/or your text frames to make sure when this gets folded your type sits comfortably, and consistently, away from the fold.
3. Do you need page folios? I think you do with a 12 page brochure.
4. I hope you are working on a 16 page magazine for Publication... so it's longer than this one (grin)!
I agree with coni but I think your onto something really great here awesome work
ReplyDeleteI agree, pretty much perfect :) but in the first two spreads the headers are not italicized and then on the rest of the pages they are!
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