First revision of pj 5

Hello guys here is my first attempt of project 5. This is a poem book that when you open completely there will be a poster on the back. The feedback i got in class was to add more cloud and ad blue on the text side. So what i done so far was added the blue on the text side,  but i  also changed the color of the text to white to represent clouds and yellow to represent sunlight.

I was wondering if i should clean the illustration up a bit what do you guy think.

Concert rework

Rework of the weakest poster from a couple weeks ago. The music is more of an ambient drone riff, i felt the spiraling lines better represented the image and the music itself. Oddly enough, it looks as if the image has a border but it doesn't.

Three Horses rework

Made a few changes, all body copy is 12pt with 20pt leading. I didn't make any changes to the front or back cover. I felt I could get a bit heavier with these since the inside content is so bright.

Hallissey Design Buisness Cards

Hello, so I am planning on ordering my business cards by the end of day tomorrow and figured I would re-post them for some last minute feedback. I am going to use the variable printing to incorporate my logo against one (of 3) of my colors on my color palate. Any last minute tweaks/suggestions would be appreciated. Thank You!

Ad Campaign

Here is my latest idea for my Valspar Ad Campaign. I will bring it in actually folded up to our next class but it is a mailer.

As most of you remember probably I did 3 ads for Valspar with the tagline "Exactly what you were looking for" ... this piece is based on "For the Artist in You" tagline. This piece would be folded up and mailed quarterly to households and each time it would focus on a different era in art, this one is based on Post-Impressionist Era (1880-1910) and inside you will see parts of the art pieces along with Valspar colors that can be found within the piece... they are presented as the "Post Impressionist Collection" I will make 3 more once the design is laid out that focus on different art eras. There is also a contest tied into it to give a call to action to the audience.

self branding

hey everyone, here is a look of my self branding, I've been working on self branding sins last quarter. I wanted to create a personal identity that  represented  where i came from to where i am going. So this past summer my aunt came to visit to the U.S.A for the first time and i found out that she was the one who wrote my name in my birth certificate, so i asked her to write it again and this is how i came concept of my logo which it represent where i came from. To show where i am going it was pretty simple i travel everyday on subway to get into the greats city in the world, so i had found this great image on a free stock website and i ask permission to use it .

But truly i am thinking of pushing this branding some more by taking a picture of different place in boston and placing them in the brand so that when i give a business card to someone it would be a different place.