Discover London

Hey so here is a re-do of a project that I did a few years back that I would really like to incorporate in my portfolio. It is a tourism ad for London to be placed on busses, train stations and on any large format advertising outlets. They are all vectors relating to London than the london skyline in the background. I wanted to keep it simple yet effective so I would love some feedback on what is working/what may not be working. Thank You.

Critique of project 4_ MBDC

  Project 4 is MBDC brochure, The target audience men and women who work in the hospital and medical supply companies. The goal of this project was to be creative, clean and finally will represent what the client is looking for.

Critique of Project 3 Pyramid Bank USA

Hey everyone, this is Project 3. This project is the branding of Pyramid bank USA. This project Target audience is people that are not really savvy about banking. People that need structure when it comes to banking. My idea at the time to come up with a clean design that emphasize the feel of a bank.

i apologize i cant i tried to put everything in one jpg but it looks like i can't

 Brochure

 Style guide

Hallissey Design Statinary

Here is my stationary for my brand. My plan is to use moo.com and have different backgrounds printed on the backs of my business cards and letter head. I plan on using the colors in my color palate. I am also deciding which business card to go with the vertical or horizontal? Any input would help me out. Thanks!

Resume

Hi guys, here is my resume to go along with the rest of my stationary. Coni, I believe you saw this a few months back as well... a few things have changed.

Not sure if it looks the same to everyone as it does to me but the jpg version of this makes the paper look kind of grey? It is white, not grey!

Stationary

Here is what I'm thinking about the my letterhead, envelopes and biz cards. I really like the simplistic approach... when making this piece to post online I found this gold background and that it complemented my pieces well so I'm thinking about incorporating pops of gold in places like my website and down the road (when I'm a wealthy designer ;-) ) I would like to add gold foiling detail to my business cards but I'm trying to think of inexpensive ways to pull it all together.

Retouch of first design BTC AD design

Hey everyone so this my retouch design of  BTC advertising Campaign. I took everyone advice from last. I kept the bold lines on some of the shapes and i also took off some of the shapes, so they don't overpower the pictures or the content. I also took out the old call to action and added a "#With Us" because my believe that it would get teen's more involve and plus teen's are all about social media. And finally i simplified the bottom of the ad by making the shape straight so the address could be straight.

I will print this and show it in class on friday.