This is my project 12, they are wedding invitations that I did for a client. I am wondering if the wood background works well for the mock up? There is an entire set, invitations, envelopes, rsvp single page site (desktop & mobile), tablecards and placecards.

Project 2

Hello  everyone i am so sorry for not attending class this week i had a personal issue that had to take care off, but i am still working on project one the BTC Ad in which i will bring in next week. I was wondering if you guys could give me quick critique on project two which i will be working on this week and hopefully bring in as well. This project is a design of direct mail piece that will help the people to know more about Muse and the product that Muse provides. Muse is not a real paper company, but muse stands for each of the nine goddesses of Greek and Roman mythology that preside over the art and science. The target audience are many small printing shops and local small business and also the regular home consumer that are in need of paper product. If you did not see this project when i brought it in 2 week this is a tri fold inside a tri fold.

Thank you looking forward on reading you comments.

I also sorry it look small is a big project i had to fit in one page

We are all connected.

This was a project I had done a couple years ago. The feedback I got on it was to rework the type and color pallet.

I updated the typeface, I wanted to keep it similar but not as heavy. I feel better about the typeface but i'm still looking to replace it with something else, possibly. As for the color, this is working a lot better than the browns, but i'm wondering if I should have gone more blue. 

REfresh Styleguide & Stationary

So here is the rest of my REfresh project, the style guide and the stationary set, Id love some final input and thoughts?

BTC AD

Hey everyone, so this the first project that i am editing this quarter. This project is a advertising campaign for the Brookline Teen Center. The Target Audience are Teen, from grade 9-12. The feedback that i got last week was to redo the logo and also to ad call to action line at the bottom and finally try to  ask permission for the rights of use of some photos or i had to find new ones.

EDITING

I started editing by re-creating the logo, i wanted to create good and effective monogram logo that represented boston and the Brookline Teen Center.I kept the same color sins that it was one of the strong theme of this project. I am still waiting on an email to see if can use some of the old images sins they were strong enough to add good value to the piece, but at the mean time i found this images on thinkstock.com potentially with a little editing could give a stronger value then the old images. Finally i adde the call to action by saying "Come Visit US to Explore Your Possibility".

#1 Piece

update on my #1 piece.
The first 3 pictures I had to take with my phone because the font I used for the headline is no longer available.

The next piece is the updated one from the feedback I got last week. Edited the picture and made the text easier to read. Aligned some text as well. 

ReFresh Cafe

Hey, so this is a piece that I am finishing up all the loose ends and wanted some feedback before I finalize it. It is for my corporate ID project. ReFresh is a new cafe that is organic, farm fresh and a "Panera" like cafe that offers a full menu and a place for inspiration. Here is the brochure and the style guide and stationary are to come but I re-worked it substantially from the original but kept the ideas and attributes. I love the way this turned out in comparison to the first one, I am wondering if the second page works? It has a somewhat different feel to the rest of the brochure, but I am thinking it may work. Thoughts? FYI its a 7x5 landscape brochure, cover and back cover are shown as pages and the rest are shown as spreads