Hey guys so here is my redesign of project 4. Ive tried to make every page consistent with each other.
i add some color triangle to the cover and the back image so ties up well. And finally i just found a quote of Mr.McDonough and put it in the middle of the bars.
I remember seeing this brochure as an example when I took this class after you, so I remember what the cover used to look like with out all the added shapes... I like how you have incorporated in the front and back cover but I think they are a little overpowering on the front. They are pretty dark in some places, like over the tree, so maybe a few can be removed? I think they work really well on the back cover how they are.
Overall, I think the inside pages are well balanced with negative space working well between the pages in each spread. Love the color palette too!
Just kidding, but yes - you have gone too far with the cover. Back off - in my opinion, the only place for an angled shape that doesn't interfere with your great composited image would be behind the logo - very subtly pointing to the building. Subtle is the operative word.
Back cover - no purple bird please. The type "Eliminate the Concept of Waste" is too large - and looks added at the last moment. So... back up and reduce and reposition those words. That's all this layout needed.
colors look great, back cover it looks like that girl is about to be eaten by a purple bird.
ReplyDeleteOn the first one I would move the bottom text into the middle and lower it some more and I agree with the bird comment
ReplyDeleteI remember seeing this brochure as an example when I took this class after you, so I remember what the cover used to look like with out all the added shapes... I like how you have incorporated in the front and back cover but I think they are a little overpowering on the front. They are pretty dark in some places, like over the tree, so maybe a few can be removed? I think they work really well on the back cover how they are.
ReplyDeleteOverall, I think the inside pages are well balanced with negative space working well between the pages in each spread. Love the color palette too!
Jose - you have gone crazy.
ReplyDeleteJust kidding, but yes - you have gone too far with the cover. Back off - in my opinion, the only place for an angled shape that doesn't interfere with your great composited image would be behind the logo - very subtly pointing to the building. Subtle is the operative word.
Back cover - no purple bird please. The type "Eliminate the Concept of Waste" is too large - and looks added at the last moment. So... back up and reduce and reposition those words. That's all this layout needed.