Sunday, November 30, 2014
Project 7 Re-touch Watchmen movie poster
Hey guys sorry it took a long time to upload this one, but here is my retouch of project 7, i had a difficult time coming up on how to make it my own, so i went back and watch the movie again to get new feeling and perspective and i got this feeling of space destroying everything. So i came up with crazy idea of implementing space into the design, by implementing space i also had to find a way of combining the city so what did sins shooting start and rain look a like i did white line in photoshop and just motion blur on the direction that i felt comfortable showing it.Finally i just played around with the Text maid "True Face" bigger.
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ReplyDeleteLooks great, couple things though is it looks a little heavy on the next to his face. Seems a little distracting. The word FACE also seems a little disconnected just because "is", "me", and "true" steps downward perfectly then face is just kind of sitting to the right. Maybe rethink the placement and put it more on display since it's the power word in the quote.
ReplyDeleteMeant to say the BLUE next to his face, my bad.
ReplyDeleteTristan makes some good points, Jose, and I was thinking that the blue next to his face would make more sense if the type actually was placed within it. Try moving the type down, and breaking it into 4 lines... so the words True Face can sit on their own line. Shouldn't they be the same, large, size? OR, maybe you should just emphasize "TRUE" instead. Say this block of text out loud, and figure out what you need to emphasize to add drama to the piece.
ReplyDeleteYour illustration is much improved... good work! This might be one of the most memorable pieces in your portfolio!