Really beautiful work, I noticed some little things to work with though. The second image, the text on these have a lot of hyphens. The corporate profile block of text has some rivers in it also. My favorite piece is the business card, that image is working really nicely.
i think this is a strong piece you have for your portfolio i would consider working on the gaps in your paragraphs and a few of the things we mentioned in class.
YES! :) I'm glad I've gotten to see this piece grow and change over the semesters and I think this has come a long way!! I love the use of the more saturated and vibrant colors and I like the more modern typeface you are now using for the RE in the logo verses that earthy typeface you were using before. I know you change the script a bit too and although I can't remember exactly what it was I think these two work well together! Overall much more of a modern look going on here.
The images are strong and speak for themselves so I'm glad you've added a lot more negative space and simplified your design. Before a lot of things were layered and boxed in and I can see you addressed it.
I know you wanted to keep that wood texture alive as well and I think you've find a good way to address it with out it overwhelming the design. Great job! :)
Really beautiful work, I noticed some little things to work with though. The second image, the text on these have a lot of hyphens. The corporate profile block of text has some rivers in it also. My favorite piece is the business card, that image is working really nicely.
ReplyDeletei think this is a strong piece you have for your portfolio i would consider working on the gaps in your paragraphs and a few of the things we mentioned in class.
ReplyDeleteYES! :) I'm glad I've gotten to see this piece grow and change over the semesters and I think this has come a long way!! I love the use of the more saturated and vibrant colors and I like the more modern typeface you are now using for the RE in the logo verses that earthy typeface you were using before. I know you change the script a bit too and although I can't remember exactly what it was I think these two work well together! Overall much more of a modern look going on here.
ReplyDeleteThe images are strong and speak for themselves so I'm glad you've added a lot more negative space and simplified your design. Before a lot of things were layered and boxed in and I can see you addressed it.
I know you wanted to keep that wood texture alive as well and I think you've find a good way to address it with out it overwhelming the design. Great job! :)