Monday, November 24, 2014

First revision of projec 6

Hey everyone here is a look of my first revision of project 6. I changed the Letter S to a regular typeface S which was helvetica regular typeface. I also took out the word now. I played around main text moving it around to see if can come up with a interested chape with the grid and i came up with this negative pace in the middle. I also pick out this great colors from a  website called coolors.co which is a color picker website like kuler.

2 comments:

  1. Jose - again, much improved. I might question the disconnection of the G and S... why not align them exactly? I also question the color contrasts in the headings... should they all be different colors? Maybe each heading should be the same color as the other headings? Also... add leading to the body copy??

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  2. I agree with everything Coni said... as far as the headings for the paragraphs... the left side lines up perfectly under the extension of the G but the right side does not line up with the extension of the "N" so thats bugging me a bit, adding some space could also help with readability.

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